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Now or never [Mar. 17th, 2010|09:23 pm]
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Title: Now or never
Author: argh/hentai_m
Rating: PG-13?
Length: 4,156 words^^;
Pairing: Onew/Minho (TofuHo♥)
Summary: Minho wants to get closer to Jinki? ^^
Warnings: unbeta-ed D: so all mistakes are mine! And this is a little bit weird :/ I had a strange idea this afternoon and yeah this what happened *sigh* :/ Sorry for the weirdness *pouts*! I wish there was more TofuHo love *weeps* TofuHo = ♥
Dedicated to: eijifujiryoma ♥♥♥! ^^



Now or never

TofuHo ♥

***

Minho frowned as he made his way across towards Kibum, and with a loud sigh he plonked down on the couch next to him. Kibum raised one eyebrow and turned to look at Minho, “What are you sulking about?” He reached a hand out and poked Minho’s arm, studying the taller boys face and noting that he looked very grumpy.

“Hmph. I thought you told me to be friendlier to Jinki-hyung in the new show?” He sighed, leaning back into the couch, “Did you see how cold he is to me?” Minho bit his lower lip, “I’m really trying, really trying to be closer to him. But it seems like he doesn’t want that. I thought you said he was always trying to be more affectionate to me, but I just pushed him away?”

Kibum sighed, “Yeah, Mr Robot, you did push him away. Yeah I did say that, and honestly Minho its early days. He’s probably so used to you being cold to him that he’s surprised or something?” Kibum shrugged and looked carefully at Minho’s face. “Why are you taking this so seriously anyways?”

“Because it hurts when he acts so cold and ignores me.” Minho pouted, but soon he was glaring when he heard Kibum laughing at him.

“What?” Minho growled feeling annoyed at Kibum.

“Haha, I just think its funny you said that! You’re Mr Cold himself. Now you know how Jinki-hyung felt in the past when you just acted cold to him.” He shrugged, and then added with a smirk, “Payback is a bitch, isn’t it Minho?”

“Kibum!” Minho groaned, “You’re not helping me out here!” He frowned, “I don’t want hyung to ignore me.” He sighed, “I don’t know why, but it hurts when he does.” He shifted on the couch, turning to look over at the kitchen table where Jinki was busy reading. “I miss the days when he was always smiling brightly at me, and patting me on the back and telling me I worked hard. Now it feels like he doesn’t even notice me at all.”

Kibum patted his shoulder, “Well, you’ll just have to try harder, won’t you Minho?” He smirked as Minho turned back to look at him, frowning slightly with confusion.

*

“Minho?” Jinki looked slightly surprised and shocked when he found himself ambushed in the morning. He leaned back against the wall, looking startled as the taller boy smiled brightly down at him, almost cornering the shorter boy. Jinki just looked alarmed as Minho’s grin widened even more and he reached a hand out to touch Jinki’s shoulder.

“Uh-I-uh…” Jinki stuttered out, and he nervously stepped sideways, trying to avoid Minho. He was getting a bit freaked out; he had never seen Minho smile so widely before. Minho finally pressed his hand to Jinki’s shoulder, giving it a good squeeze but then Jinki bolted, and ran towards to Kibum.

Minho sighed softly, his smile faltering as he saw Jinki peering at him from over Kibum’s shoulder. His eyes wide and he looked a little scared. Minho tried another smile, smiling right at Jinki who was still looking at the taller rapper from behind Kibum.

“Kibum, is Minho feeling alright?” Jinki mumbled into Kibum’s shoulder.

Minho’s smile froze, and then he faded completely as he heard Jinki’s words, and he thought to himself well that was a complete failure. Hyung thinks I’m weird or sick or something. Is it that weird for me to smile at him?

He walked over to say something to Kibum and Jinki, but the older boy bolted and was out the door so fast, that Minho didn’t even have a chance. He just sighed and frowned at Kibum grumpily, “This is never going to work!”

Kibum shrugged and then said, “But he didn’t ignore you? So what’s the problem?” He shrugged, “Maybe next time, try to um smile a little more normally and not like you’re about to kill someone.” He patted Minho on the back, “Maybe you should um practice your smile in the mirror?”

Minho stared in disbelief at Kibum, and he blinked his eyes, frowning is my smile that weird? Ugh.

“But he was freaked out by me.” Minho pouted, “he didn’t ignore me, but he couldn’t wait to get away either. What am I going to do, Kibum?” Minho sighed and the older boy patted him on the back lightly.

“Oh why don’t you wink at him? Aren’t the fans meant to go crazy from one of your winks?”

Minho frowned, “I don’t want him to go crazy, I just want to be closer to him! I don’t know, isn’t that a weird idea?” He paused and thought about it, “It’s not like I want him to fall for me or something, do I?” He blinked at Kibum who was grinning strangely at him.

“Don’t you? Kibum grinned, tugging teasingly on Minho’s arm, “Are you sure you don’t want him to fall for you? It sounds like you like him to me.” He smirked and Minho gaped at Kibum looking shocked.

“What? No, I don’t like him! One of the manager-hyung’s said we needed to be closer. And you said it too, and so I thought I should be closer to him… I don’t like him! Definitely not!” Minho vehemently shook his head, and Kibum just shrugged.

“Okay, whatever. You don’t like him then. I don’t care.”

*

The next day Minho walked into the room, smiling a little when he saw Jinki lift his head and look at him. Minho grinned a little and then cocked his head to one side and winked at Jinki. He stepped closer and felt like laughing when he saw Jinki staring thoughtfully at him, so he winked again at the older boy. Thank you Kibum, ah I would never have thought of winking at him, but he’s not ignoring me now!

Minho winked a third time, simply because he was happy, and he thought it was lucky to do it a third time. He stood beside the table and looked down at Jinki, who was still staring curiously at Minho. He sucked in a deep breath and was about to speak, when Jinki got up quickly and left the room.

“What the hell?” Minho pouted, deflating as he watched Jinki shutting the door firmly behind him. “Maybe I’m going about this all the wrong way?” He sighed, tapping his index finger against the table. “Maybe I need a different tactic?”

“A different tactic?”

Minho practically jumped out of his skin when he heard Jinki’s voice behind him, and he turned, feeling surprised to see Jinki standing right there. He hadn’t heard the door, or heard Jinki coming in, he had totally snuck up on Minho. “Here.” Jinki held out a little bottle to Minho, and frowning he took it, wondering what on earth it was.

“Eye drops.” Jinki smiled sweetly up at him, “You’ve got something stuck in your eye, right? You should put some in; they’ll get rid of it.” He added with a slow nod of his head, “I know it’s not normal to share eye drops,” Jinki looked troubled, “But that’s a new one, I haven’t used it yet.” He shook his head slowly, “I want you to have it.” Jinki pressed the little bottle into Minho’s hand, their fingers brushing for a few seconds, and Minho thought he felt his heart speed up but he figured he imagined it.

Minho just gaped at Jinki, missing half of his words as he just stared at Jinki in shock. Huh? Eye drops? Ahhhh he thought I was winking at him because I had something caught in my eye? Fuck. Oh my god, this is awful.

When Minho looked up again, he saw Jinki was frowning and talking to Jonghyun, and he froze as he heard the words, “Do you think Minho is okay? He’s been acting all weird lately, and just now… he was being funny towards me.” Jinki frowned and looked thoughtfully at Minho before turning to face Jonghyun who just grinned and shrugged his shoulders.

Great. Jinki-hyung thinks I’m just acting weird. This is just fucking great. It’s not weird if I’m all over the others, but it is weird if I try to be friendlier with Jinki-hyung!

*

Jinki shrieked when he felt Minho grab onto him and hug him tightly. Sure Minho was often affectionate with Taemin and the others, but the last thing Jinki was expecting was to be hugged. He stood frozen in Minho’s arms, just blinking almost owlishly as Minho awkwardly squeezed him tighter, and then he could hear the shuffling sound of slippers and he looked up to see Taemin standing there yawning at them.

“Hyung.” Taemin pouted, “I was trying to sleep, and did you have to scream?” He pouted and waved his hand, “It’s just a hug, honestly, you freak out over nothing.” He poked Jinki’s cheek with his index finger.

“I-uh, I just wasn’t expecting it.” Jinki mumbled, feeling his cheeks turning red as Minho pressed their bodies together tighter, and he rested his head on Jinki’s shoulder. Jinki immediately shifted, trying desperately to jerk their hips apart. Taemin stood their staring wonderingly at Jinki’s lightly flushed face, wondering why he was slowly turning red.

“Minho… doesn’t normally hug me.” Jinki added in a softer, surprised sounding tone, and Taemin nodded his head. He was enjoying watching Jinki squirm, and he could see the older boy wriggling in Minho’s arms. Taemin grinned as he saw Minho tightening his grip on their wriggling leader. “Minho?” Jinki pouted sounding slightly short of breath and panicky.

“Hyung, stop wriggling.” Minho commanded stroking his hand down Jinki’s back. “Hyung, don’t you get it, I’m just trying to be warmer towards you.” Minho sighed, and he shut his eyes, feeling depressed. Jinki was squirming like he wanted to get away, and so Minho shifted his long legs, pressing his hands against Jinki’s lower back.

Without really thinking he pushed Jinki in against him firmer, trying to stop him from wriggling, trying to make him accept the hug. Trying to make Jinki relax, he didn’t think it was that bad to hug him. He sighed and was about to say something else, when Minho’s eyes widened and he realised something, as Jinki seemed to start wriggling more.

“Minho! Let go of me, now!” Jinki sounded angry, but there was a touch of something else, maybe embarrassment to his tone. Taemin continued to watch looking amused, and Minho blinked his eyes thoughtfully, letting out a soft “oh” as he realised what that strange semi-hard bulge pressing into his leg was. He suddenly understood why Jinki was wriggling and trying to escape, and that thought made his heart pound.

With a sigh, Minho let go, and he stepped back, “Sorry, hyung!” He mumbled looking down, and he held back a smile as he saw a small bulge tenting the front of Jinki’s jeans. He lifted his head to apologise again, but Jinki bolted straight for the bathroom, leaving Minho to wonder about what had caused him to be in such a state.

“Hyung, you certainly had Jinki-hyung all worked up.” Taemin grinned, “It was funny. But he never reacts like that when I hug him?” He added with a slight frown, “Or anyone else, but normally we don’t hug hyung as tight as you did? Maybe you made him feel uncomfortable?” Taemin innocently added, and Minho nodded his head.
*

“Okay, you were right,” Minho sighed as he confided in Kibum again, “You’re always right.” He added frowning as he stood next to Kibum’s bed, looking at up at the boy.

Kibum looked up from his magazine, “What was I right about?” He asked as he gripped the edge of the bed, looking at Minho with a confused expression.

“Jinki-hyung.” Minho sniffed slightly, pouting up at Kibum, “You were right. I uh think I like him.”

Kibum smiled down at Minho, looking like the cat that stole the cream, “Oh… oh!” He added sounding smug, but Minho just felt depressed and pretty awful really. It seemed obvious to him that Jinki was always trying to get as far away as possible from him.

“So… what caused this revelation? What caused you to suddenly realise it?” Kibum asked tapping Minho’s wrist to get his attention, “I mean it was pretty obvious Minho.” Kibum shrugged, “To me anyways. Otherwise you wouldn’t have been trying so hard to do whatever it was you were trying to do? Make hyung like you?”

Minho gritted his teeth, “No, Kibum-hyung. You know I was only trying to be closer to Jinki-hyung… I wasn’t trying to make him like me. I was only trying to make things less awkward between us. But now I’ve scared him and he’s in the bathroom and he won’t come out?” Minho blinked, he hadn’t meant to say that but he did anyways.

“You did what?” Kibum frowned, “What did you do Minho?”

“He hugged Jinki-hyung!” Taemin piped up, walking into the room with a yawn, “Didn’t you hear the scream just now, hyung?” Taemin looked surprised, he was sure everyone on their apartment floor had heard that scream.

Kibum shook his head slowly, and then waved his head phones at Taemin, “I was listening to music, until that oaf” He poked Minho in the chest sharply, “came in and disturbed me. So… Minho hugged Jinki-hyung, and he screamed and now he’s in the bathroom and he won’t come out?”

Taemin and Minho both nodded their heads, Minho however looked depressed but Taemin was smiling sweetly.

“Do you know why the bathroom door is locked?” Jonghyun looked grumpy, as he walked into the bedroom scratching his head, “I want to clean my teeth?” He frowned as he looked around at Kibum, sitting there serenely, Minho pouting sadly and Taemin was just smiling. “Um, what’s going on? And what was that scream just now?”

“Minho-hyung hugged Jinki-hyung!” Taemin supplied immediately sounding all chirpy, “And now Jinki-hyung won’t come out of the bathroom.

Jonghyun just blinked, “Oh. What the hell?” And he walked off, heading straight for the bathroom, determined to get Jinki out of the bathroom.

“Okay, so you just hugged Jinki-hyung?” Kibum frowned, pursing his lips together as he thought, “Nothing else happened?” He frowned as he noticed Minho shifting nervously, looking very uncomfortable.

“Taemin-ah, go and help Jonghyun get Jinki out of the bathroom?”

As soon as Taemin left, Kibum tapped Minho’s shoulder and said, “Spit it out. What happened?”

Minho frowned, “He-he kept squirming, so I held onto him tighter.” His eyes darted up, catching Kibum nodding his head. “And then he was wriggling even more, and trying to escape. And it hurt, I just wanted him to relax, you know?” Minho gulped, “I realised I liked him then, because he-he” He paused again feeling embarrassed, “he smelt so good, and I just wanted to cling to him even more.” Minho looked down avoiding Kibum’s gaze.

“That’s… not normal is it? To hug someone and not want to let go?” He frowned, and sighed, “But yeah he kept wriggling and I told him to stop. And I grabbed him more, and then I realised…” Minho sucked in a deep breath, “He was getting hard.” Minho went silent, his cheeks turning red.

Kibum suddenly understood why Jinki had shut himself in the bathroom. He looked down at saw Minho looking up at him expectantly. “Oh.” Kibum mumbled, blinking his eyes, “So that’s why he’s in the bathroom, hmmm, do you think he’s…” He trailed of and smirked slightly, as he looked at Minho. “Do you think he’s jerking off?”

Somehow the image of Jinki doing that amused Kibum simply because he could not imagine their innocent looking leader doing that. He giggled slightly, suddenly feeling amused, until he looked down and saw the glower Minho was shooting him.

“What?” Kibum frowned, “You don’t think that’s funny?”

“Hyung!” Minho practically whined, “What am I meant to do?”

Kibum sighed, “How should I know? Um, let me think about it okay?”

*

The next morning things were decidedly frosty between Minho and Jinki. Jinki was very cold towards the tall boy, he didn’t even say good morning to him. Minho sulked at the table, his big round eyes watching Jinki sadly, as the older boy ignored him and fussed over Taemin. Taemin just grinned and snuggled into Jinki, letting him fuss, he loved the attention.

Minho sighed heavily, glowering as he saw Jinki smile brightly as he leaned in to hug Taemin, wrapping his arms around the skinny boy’s torso easily. Hmph so its only me he’s uncomfortable hugging. He stabbed his chop sticks into the rice suddenly not feeling hungry as he saw how comfortable Jinki looked hugging Taemin, that was until Taemin spoke.

“Hyung,” Taemin shut his eyes and patted Jinki’s back, “How come you’re so comfortable with me, but when Minho-hyung hugged you last night, you went bright red?” Taemin asked innocently, “And then you locked yourself in the bathroom? You don’t do that after you hug me?”

Jinki froze, and Minho suddenly didn’t feel like leaving the table anymore. He watched as Jinki slowly detached himself from Taemin, and he laughed nervously, “I-uh… I didn’t turn red, Taemin-ah!” He mumbled, looking uncomfortable, “that… was just… the um…” He trailed off and Minho leaned in over the table, curious because he didn’t even realise Jinki had turned red the night before.

“The uh lighting!” Jinki grinned, “Yeah the um lights made me look red.”

Taemin frowned, and pointed, “The lights? The lights made you red? Um, hyung that doesn’t really work.” He frowned, and turned to look at Minho, “Right, Minho-hyung?” Taemin smiled across at Minho, completely unaware of the tension between the two.

Suddenly Minho felt sick of everything, and he felt frustrated and annoyed. His attempts at being subtle had failed him completely. He was sick of Jinki ignoring him, and acting coldly towards him. It felt worse after seeing how happily he had hugged Taemin minutes earlier. Now he was determined he was just going to be honest and say it straight out.

“No, it doesn’t work.” Minho got up slowly and made his way around the other side of the table, stopping beside Jinki’s chair. He placed a hand on Jinki’s shoulder gripping it firmly, “So hyung, what really made you red and…” He trailed of leaving the other words unsaid, but they hung in the air implied. And what made you hard, hyung?

Jinki made an attempt to turn away from Minho, but he placed his other hand on his other shoulder and held him firmly in place. Minho looked at Taemin, “Taemin, I think Kibum was looking for you just now, you should go and find him.” Jinki opened his mouth to protest, but he sighed in defeat as Taemin left the room silently.

“Hyung, why are you always ignoring me or acting cold to me?” Minho frowned, biting down into his lip, “Why was it so awkward hugging me last night?” He sighed heavily, “I know we’ve never been that close, but why can’t we be?” His tone sounded hurt and injured and he pouted down at Jinki.

“It’s… embarrassing,” Jinki looked down at the table, and Minho watched as his cheeks turned red. “You should be able to guess after last night.” Jinki sighed, “I’m sorry, I didn’t really ignore you on purpose, and you just make me feel… uncomfortable.”

“But why?” Minho pouted and unintentionally he dug his fingers harder into Jinki’s shoulders. “It hurts when I see you being so friendly to other members and then so cold to me. When you high five Jonghyun so easily, and with me it’s like you don’t want to do it.” Minho paused and loosened his grip on Jinki’s shoulders when he saw him wincing.

“I realised something last night, I realised that maybe I like you.” Minho chewed on his bottom lip, and he jiggled his right leg, suddenly feeling nervous and yet pleased that he had said it. “Like you more than a friend.” He swallowed, noticing how Jinki tensed and then turned to look up at him.

“Oh.” Jinki looked up and offered Minho a bright smile, “Oh!” He said again sounding happier, “Minho-ah, you like me?” He blinked his eyes rapidly, making Minho just stare at him, waiting nervously for Jinki to say something else. Jinki didn’t speak; he just stared up at Minho, making him feel really nervous.

Minho opened his mouth to speak, but before he could Jinki was getting up, and Minho thought oh fuck he’s going to run away again? He reached out and made an attempt to grab at Jinki’s arms to stop him, but he realised with a start that Jinki was standing there facing him, and then he leaned forward and hugged Minho tightly.

Minho’s eyes widened in shock as he felt Jinki’s arms wrap around his waist, and Jinki pressed his face into Minho’s chest. Minho couldn’t believe it, and he looked down surprised and then he wrapped his arms around Jinki and held onto him tightly. He shut his eyes, breathing in deeply, and feeling happy as hugged Jinki-hyung, he smelt so good Minho didn’t want to let go.

“Minho-ah, I’ve liked you for a while now.” Jinki mumbled into his chest, grinning, “I didn’t think you’d like me back. I should’ve believed Kibum; ah I need to thank him later.” He added pressing his face to Minho’s chest.

“Kibum-hyung?” Minho blinked, “Wait… Kibum-hyung knew you liked me?” Minho frowned, his brain working furiously as he processed this.

“Uh, yeah.” Jinki nodded his head and pulled back from Minho’s chest, “He helped me out a little.” He admitted finally, looking sheepishly up at Minho, “because you know, I’m hopeless.”

“You’re not hopeless.” Minho smiled down at him, “not at all. Now how did Kibum-hyung help you?”

“He uh told me to act cold towards you and to ignore you.” Jinki blinked, and with a serious face he added, “It was really hard, Minho… but he said it’d be worth it.” He nodded and then smiled up at Minho, his smile so bright and brilliant that Minho couldn’t help but melt with happiness from such a smile. “And it was worth it.”

That little manipulating shit! He told Jinki-hyung to act like that, and then he was busy telling me stuff too. He must be laughing his head off, ugh I feel so angry at Kibum-hyung! Why did he have to make things so complicated?

“I’m sorry Minho, I know I should’ve just confessed to you… but I didn’t think you’d like me back.” He pouted, “Don’t be mad at Kibum, I pestered him so much.” Jinki could sense that Minho was annoyed at Kibum However, Minho felt his annoyance disappearing when Jinki smiled up at him again, and he could feel his hands soft and gentle on his back.

Jinki pursed his lips together, and Minho blinked and then he just leaned down and kissed him. It was awkward at first, both of them unsure and inexperienced, but it didn’t take them long to get the hang of it. Jinki stood on the tips of toes, trying to get closer to Minho, his eyes blissfully shut as Minho deepened the kiss.

And in the background, Minho could hear Kibum laughing and cackling, but he just pushed him out of his mind, concentrating completely on Jinki. He found himself hugging Jinki tighter, pulling him harder against his body, and he felt happy when Jinki didn’t protest and instead he hugged Minho back tighter. Minho melted into Jinki’s arms, happy that he was so relaxed and now things were sorted and perfect between them.

“Finally.” Kibum grinned from the doorway, and Taemin peaked over his shoulder and Jonghyun peered around Taemin. “Finally!” Kibum repeated smiling, “They finally got together, I was starting to think it would never happen.” He sighed happily, as he watched them kiss deeply, and then when he realised Taemin was watching he covered his eyes, ignoring his protests.

Kibum then dragged Taemin and Jonghyun away, leaving Jinki and Minho alone together in the living room. Sighing as he looked back one last time, feeling so happy as he saw Jinki’s bright smile and the way they held onto each other.

Kibum was shutting the door as Jinki leaned up to cover Minho’s face in delicate kisses, and he whispered, “This is for all the times I was cold and ignored you.” He placed kisses all over Minho’s cheeks, and to the tip of his nose. “I’m sorry, Minho! He whispered again, hugging him tightly as he continued to cover his face in kisses. Minho sighed with happiness, realising that he couldn’t be happier and no longer felt angry at Kibum anymore, no he decided he wanted to thank him later too.

***

*sits in the corner*

Okay so that was kinda fail-y. sjkdfklfjdklsfjdl But I suddenly had this strange idea T_T and I just wrote it up :/ even if it didn’t really work out.

*slinks off to finish poupee comments for the day* :/
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[User Picture]From: hentai_m
2010-03-17 08:24 am (UTC)

spot ^^

Spot for eijifujiryoma ^^;; even if you are on a roadtrip~ ♥ *waits patiently for you to return^^*
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From: eijifujiryoma
2010-03-18 02:28 pm (UTC)

Re: spot ^^

*is illegally reading this using cafe internet while parents went shopping*

I seriously don't know why you dedicate these wonderful ficcies to ME. T^T I don't do anything for you at all. >< *will finish those dedication fics for sure*

So, I'm not back from the trip yet (will be back in three days promise!!!) but I found this while scrolling in replay. I wonder how to explain how much my love for you is increasing. <333333333333333333333333 On to comment.

KIM KIBUM! WHAT EXACTLY IS YOUR INTENTION! ...Honestly, I'm not too sure. ^^;; But, oh, Jinki and Minho are so sweet~ They're so awkward and adorable. I felt so sorry for Minho, he's trying so hard. But it looks Jinki was having it HARD as well! <--- Yup, did that on purpose. :P I do feel like knocking Minho on the head though. Jinki had a hard-on from the hugging and he doesn't know why. No one is allowed to be that clueless. <33

Lol, yup, Kibum is always right even when he's wrong. xD Taemin is so clueless here though. He just sets the setting for TofuHo, whether he knows it or not. <3 ROFL, I can't imagine Jinki acting cold (even with HB) but I CAN imagine him jerking off. 8D :X

It may not have gone according to what you had in mind BUT IT'S STILL AMAZING AND SO CUTE AND I IS MEMING!!! It's a great pick-me-up after that news about Minho's accident. T-T

WILL COME BACK AND SEND PROPER EMAILS THEN! ILU AND MISS YOU UNNIE! <333333333333
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[User Picture]From: xxqod
2010-03-17 08:59 am (UTC)
Spot? XD
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From: ex_argh
2010-03-18 01:13 am (UTC)
no :P you don't get a spot
(only kidding LOL) next time I post a fic, I'll leave you a spot? ^^;
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[User Picture]From: eukyungkyung
2010-03-17 09:26 am (UTC)
don't you just love key?
he's like my fave character in this fic

and the eyedrop part had me lmao


^_^v
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From: ex_argh
2010-03-18 01:16 am (UTC)
yes 8D oh I love writing Key! @@ He's so much fun XDDD somehow~ hahahaha!

awww okay ^_^ well thats good because Key had such a major role in it? :D
LOL yeah the eyedrop part was probably a bit lame but it amused me slightly :P
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From: ex_argh
2010-03-18 01:18 am (UTC)
TofuHo makes the world go round *nods* TofuHo = ♥! XDDDDD Sorry :P its my SHINee OTP~ (and is that Shinya in your icon? :D)

haha thanks^^ I'm glad you liked it~ yeah I wanted Minho to be smiling freakily *nods*
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[User Picture]From: volatileflame
2010-03-17 02:43 pm (UTC)
lol~ Key XD

i really liked this. i thought it was cute : )
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From: ex_argh
2010-03-18 01:19 am (UTC)
thank you^^;; ♥
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[User Picture]From: pixziestikxz
2010-03-17 04:24 pm (UTC)
I shall spot myself.

remind me to read this, bb. XD
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From: ex_argh
2010-03-18 01:20 am (UTC)
^^; I thought about spotting for you D: but then I wasn't sure LOL^^;
♥ just read it when you have time?
and I hope you won't be like omg this is so full of mistakes D:

LOL :P ♥
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[User Picture]From: miss_circle
2010-03-18 04:08 am (UTC)
Huaaaaah! This is so cuuuute! <3333
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From: ex_argh
2010-03-18 07:33 am (UTC)
thank you XDDDDD! I'm glad you thought it was cute even though I rushed it :/
:D ♥
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[User Picture]From: geenkey
2010-03-18 06:46 am (UTC)
YAH!!! KIM KIBUM!!!! ahahahahhahahahahha..... i was like WTF?! this is kibum's 'fault' ahahahahah but YES ONHO YOU TWO SHOULD THANK HIM!!!!!

i love this yay!!! onho!!!!
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From: ex_argh
2010-03-18 07:34 am (UTC)
hehehehe XDDDD yeah Onho def needs to thank Kibum~ ♥
thanks for the comment :D
and ugh I love your icon~ *sits and stares*
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[User Picture]From: granitemouth
2010-03-18 07:37 am (UTC)
Oh this made me....LOL and melt so much!!!

Especially with the hugging scene. It was so thrilling.
But I guess I love Kibum the most in this story.

Thanks so much for this!
HWAITING~
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From: ex_argh
2010-03-18 07:43 am (UTC)
^^ yay I'm glad it made you lol~ I wanted that kind of reaction hehehe~ and the hugging scene was thrilling? oooh thank you^^; I was worried it was a bit blah.

Yeah I think everyone loved Kibum in this XD he was so... I dont know? awesome? evil? 8D

thats okay ^^;;
thank you for your lovely comment~ ♥
:DDD
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[User Picture]From: train1332
2010-03-18 01:30 pm (UTC)
OMG TOFUHO

-bbl to comment moar-
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From: ex_argh
2010-03-19 05:44 am (UTC)
TofuHo = ♥? 8DDDDDDD

sorry for the failsome fic :/
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[User Picture]From: weerainbow
2010-03-22 05:23 pm (UTC)
Ahh why am I falling so hard for TofuHo these days?? It's all your fault for writing them so well!! I was enjoying them but then I read more of your fics and BAM it's ♥
This was fabulous. I love Kibum's sneaky efforts in getting them together, I love Jinki's cuteness and how he had to work so hard to pretend to ignore Minho, and I love Minho's determined efforts to get closer to Jinki!!
The part where Minho first hugged Jinki was a total favourite ^^ he realised right then how much he wanted to do that more, and awww poor Jinki got too excited and ended up embarrassed. But it all worked out so well in the end YAY!!
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From: ex_argh
2010-03-22 11:31 pm (UTC)
YAY! XD Because TofuHo makes the world go round? ♥ :D TofuHo = ♥!! XD Sorry :P
thank you~ and your comment makes me squeal with happiness XD hahahahaha (partly because you said about falling for TofuHo ♥♥♥)
:DDD
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[User Picture]From: jishu
2010-07-28 03:54 pm (UTC)
I can't really imagine Onew trying to act cold... XD;;
Key~ loved his part here~
Taemin was teasing them!!! XD and he was so happy with what he witnessed XD!!!
Sort of makes me happy too <333
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From: ex_argh
2010-07-29 04:24 am (UTC)
^^ yeah I guess it is kind of unbelievable that he could act cold oooops XDDDDD
me too XD I always have so much fun writing Key^^;;;
Yeah he was XDDD it was fun to write him too :P
thanks ♥ :DDD
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[User Picture]From: mikaerayohiko
2010-10-23 12:52 am (UTC)

lalallaa

~tofuho hahahaha.. xD it makes the world go round xDDD I read this fic while listening to hello xD hahaha awesomely cute!!! xDD
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From: ex_argh
2010-10-23 02:00 am (UTC)

Re: lalallaa

I agree 8D TofuHo does make the world go round~ ♥
thank you^^;
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[User Picture]From: oconje
2011-07-12 07:49 am (UTC)
Really super cute story!
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From: ex_argh
2011-07-12 08:50 am (UTC)
thank you :D ♥
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