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bang bang bang... [Feb. 28th, 2010|09:35 pm]
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Title: My Heart
Author: argh/hentai_m
Rating: PG-13
Length: 5,297 e_e
Pairing: Onew/Minho
Summary: Minho gets back from Canada... and... drives Jinki insane/mad? ^^;
Warnings: It's kind of random/weird... and fluffy? XD And first SHINee fic T__T;; so yeah... *nervous* oh and it hasn't been beta-read T_T



My Heart

Minho/Onew

***

Minho yawned as he stumbled into the apartment, it wasn’t that late but he had arrived back from Canada that morning and instead of having a relaxing day he had a fully packed schedule. He hadn’t even had a chance to catch up with his band mates, and he was only getting home now and it was almost eleven o’clock. Yawning again he dumped his bag on the floor, surprised when he saw the apartment was almost completely dark and silent, and he pouted slightly. Minho thought someone might’ve stayed up to see him home, but instead they had all gone to bed early.

Sighing, Minho picked up his bag and just made his way to their bedroom, he pushed the door open quietly, and the gap in the curtains let a sliver of moonlight in, lighting the room so he didn’t need to turn the light on. He dumped his bag down in front of his wardrobe, he was too tired to think about unpacking or doing anything but sleep. Minho yawned again, and smiled as he looked around seeing all his band mates sleeping soundly and wishing to join them he tugged his clothes off, leaving him clad only in his boxers.

He made his way over to his bed and with a sigh of relief and happiness to be sleeping in his own bed again he sank down into the softness. It felt so nice to be home, Minho thought as he shut his eyes, and he felt so happy to back with SHINee, he had missed them all, especially one person. He had enjoyed his time in Canada, but it felt so nice to be home, to be home with the rest of his group. He smiled in the dark as he looked over at one particular member who was sleeping facing Minho, he couldn’t wait to see the next morning and talk to that person. Because of his eagerness to see his band mates the next day, sleep came very easily.

*

Jinki sighed as he rolled onto his side, somehow it felt really hot and stuffy in the bedroom and he couldn’t sleep and he felt as if he had forgotten something important. Pouting he sat up and yawned as he rubbed his eyes to wake up, Oh! Jinki’s eyes widened as he remembered that Minho should be back already. Oh wait, maybe his flight arrives today? Guess he won’t be back until later. With a sigh Jinki bit his lip and he turned to look at Minho’s empty bed, and he gasped when he saw that Minho was in fact in bed, causing a Jinki’s heart to flutter happily and he smiled. Jinki found it impossible to look away and instead he stared at Minho, who was sleeping on his back, the sheet pushed down his body so that it just covered his hips and his chest was bare. Jinki could see a little of his boxers from under the sheet, and he had one arm flung up by his head and pillow and the other down by his side.

Jinki blinked his eyes, wondering if he was actually awake or asleep, and he rubbed his eyes again to make sure Minho really was there because it sure felt like a dream. After staring at that empty bed for a couple of weeks, wishing Minho was there, it seemed too good to be true that Minho was actually there. Jinki swallowed as he gazed across the room, at Minho, he was smiling in his sleep, and to Jinki he looked almost angelic. His hair was all messy, and the fact that he was smiling sweetly in his sleep, meant that Jinki couldn’t help but smile too.

It took all of his efforts to keep his eyes on Minho’s face, but his eyes kept being drawn down, down to Minho’s bare chest. Jinki swallowed as he watched Minho’s slender chest rise and fall, watching the way his muscles moved, and Jinki found he couldn’t take his eyes away from his chest. He clutched at his sheet, staring at Minho’s body, and unconsciously he licked his lips, thinking it should be illegal for Minho to sleep shirtless… it really should be… ahhh he looks so damn good. Shit… I have to… stop thinking about Minho like this… I can’t like him, I really can’t…I’m the leader, I’m meant to look out for all the members and not be biased towards one. It just wouldn’t be proper for me to like him or anyone else. Ugh. I must stop staring at him, at that goddamn gorgeous chest. He looks even more gorgeous than when he left, or is it just because I haven’t seen him for so long?

Jinki swallowed again, sighing as he forced his gaze up Minho’s chest, making him look away from Minho’s jutting hipbones and his belly button, and he slowly brought his gaze up. Must stop staring! Must stop staring at beautiful, gorgeous Minho! Jinki memorised every inch of Minho’s chest, taking in how his chest lifted as he breathed, and his nipples, and the ridge of his collarbones. Jinki sucked in a deep breath, trying to calm his heart down, he was getting way too excited over shirtless Minho. Jinki decided it didn’t help that he had been away in Canada, in fact he was going to blame it on that.

He had just managed to settle his eyes on Minho’s lips, when he noticed Minho wriggled and stretching like he was going to wake up and Jinki froze, as Minho let out a little moan, and then to Jinki’s horror he saw one eye open. Shit. Shit! Jinki froze and then quickly lay down, pulling his sheet up over his head, hoping like hell that Minho hadn’t noticed him staring or that he had been sitting up. Hoping that he had imagined meeting Minho’s gaze, and that Minho had not seen him at all.

Jinki squeezed his eyes shut as he lay under the sheet trying not to breathe, or move, but of course he was also panicking about Minho catching him staring, and so instead of lying still like he was sleeping, he tossed and turned. Shit. I should’ve… stopped staring at him… argh… it was probably so damn obvious!! This is ridiculous I have to stop liking Minho, I need to. This just isn’t healthy Jinki pouted and sighed, hoping that Minho would just go back to sleep, and he had decided that Minho had just gone back to sleep, and he even thought about peeking out from the sheet, when the sheet was pulled down from his face.

Jinki tensed immediately, lying deathly still, as he felt fingers press to his wrist, “Hyung” a soft deep voice whispered and Jinki tensed even more, his mental chant of shit started up again on repeat. “Hyung” The voice sounded amused, “Hyung, I know you’re awake so stop pretending?” The fingers attached to his wrist began to tickle his skin lightly, and with a sigh, Jinki opened his eyes, forcing himself to look Minho in the eyes and not to drop his gaze to that gorgeous chest.

“Hi…” Jinki mumbled feeling an idiot and he just smiled brightly up at Minho pretending to be half asleep, so he rubbed his eyes and yawned. “You’re back!” He beamed even brighter up at Minho, who looked amused and still had his fingers pressed to Jinki’s wrist. Minho’s fingers felt so warm against his skin, and Jinki felt a little jittery, his heartbeat increasing as he felt Minho tap out a pattern against his skin.

“Shhh, you’ll wake the others!” Minho whispered, and wrapped his hand around Jinki’s wrist, holding on to it firmly, “let’s go and talk in the kitchen.” Jinki frowned and went to say something about getting more sleep, but Minho was determined and so he just tickled and tugged on Jinki’s wrist until the elder sighed and gave in. He got up slowly, and stared at Minho’s hand still attached to his wrist, Jinki would be lying if he said he didn’t like the fact that Minho’s hand was wrapped around his wrist, but he was a little surprised by it. He just let Minho drag him out of the bedroom, and he stared at that hand, and not Minho’s butt and bare back, no he forced himself to focus on the hand, letting Minho lead him into the kitchen.

“Minho?” Jinki felt a bit confused as he sat down at the table, “why… are we here?” He asked with a frown as Minho sat opposite him and handed him a glass of water.

“Because.” Minho paused to have a sip of water, “you were talking too loudly, hyung! I didn’t want you to wake the others.” He smiled across at Jinki looking as if he thought it was obvious why they were there, “and you missed me right, hyung?” He blinked his eyes at Jinki, making the older boy feel almost faint, and he was sure his face was turning bright red. Ugh. So goddamn cute, Minho stop… looking at me like that!

“Uhh…” Jinki swallowed and looked down at the table rather than Minho’s face, “Yeah… of course… I missed you.” Jinki winced, as he spoke, he sounded so lame, but he didn’t know what else to say. It wasn’t like he could say “Yes Minho I missed you so much that I dreamt of you every night and woke up disappointed when I saw you weren’t home yet.” And he couldn’t think straight when he had Minho sitting opposite him, shirtless and looking at him like that. Jinki shifted nervously, he could feel Minho’s eyes on him and that somehow was making him feel even more nervous.

Minho pouted, “Ah, so you didn’t really miss me, did you hyung?” He sounded upset and Jinki looked up right away, feeling his heart pound as he saw the sad way Minho looked back at him, and how he pouted across at him, all Jinki could think was that he was so damn adorable, and he really had to stop staring at Minho.

Jinki quickly got up and placed his glass in the sink, he turned the tap on to rinse it, when he felt arms circle his waist. Jinki froze, and his eyes shut as he felt Minho’s body press right up against his, he could feel Minho’s hipbones and crotch pressed up against his ass. Jinki swallowed as he felt Minho press his chin to Jinki’s shoulder, his arms hugging him tightly.

“Hyung, I missed you a lot,” Minho’s voice was soft and husky in Jinki’s ear, and he shivered as he felt his breath against his shoulder, “I thought about you a lot too.” Minho smiled slightly, moving his hips a little so that they rocked against Jinki’s back and ass and the older boy felt weak at the knees. “You missed me too, didn’t you Jinki-hyung?” Minho turned his head so his lips were brushing Jinki’s ear as he spoke, and he smiled faintly as he felt Jinki shiver slightly from the touch.

Jinki gripped the edge of the sink tightly, his brain felt frozen, he didn’t think he could speak even if he wanted to. He opened his mouth to make a noise, but his mouth was dry, and all he could concentrate on was how Minho smelt, and the way his body felt pressed against his own. The way Minho’s razor sharp hips pressed in against his ass, and he almost felt like he could feel a bulge too but he was sure he imagined that. He swallowed and opened his eyes as he felt Minho pull away, in some ways he felt relieved, but mostly he wished it had been longer. He shivered slightly and he half turned, trying to hide the fact that Minho was turning him on.

“Hyung, I’m going to go and shower!” Minho grinned and winked at Jinki, and he reached out and brushed his fingers against Jinki’s shoulder. Jinki just nodded dumbly blinking his eyes as he watched Minho leave the kitchen. With out thinking about what he was doing Jinki followed him, and he stood in the door way watching Minho’s back as he walked towards the bathroom.

Jinki’s brain suffered another meltdown when Minho stopped halfway, and just pulled his boxers down, dropping them to floor and then picking them up. Jinki was rooted to the spot, his eyes wide with desire as the now naked Minho walked sexily towards the bathroom, and just as he opened the door, he turned back to smirk and wink at Jinki.

Oh shit! He caught… me staring! Oh shit………… how will I ever get the image of naked Minho out of my head? Oh Christ Minho, do you have any idea what you do to me?

*

Minho grinned as he stepped out of the bathroom, he saw Jinki freeze in his tracks, and his face turned a faint pink as Minho winked at him again. Jinki breathed in deeply, trying to focus on Minho’s face, and not follow the drops of water that slid down Minho’s face, and then down his bare chest. Jinki was starting to think he was going crazy, as he tried to ignore the fact that Minho was only wearing a towel and that he looked so damn hot. In fact he always looked hot, but Jink was sure he had not seen Minho shirtless this much in one day before.

Jinki’s gaze followed Minho as he walked off in his towel to their bedroom, and Jinki stood in a daze minutes after Minho was gone. He only moved when he felt Taemin shaking his arm and calling him, and then he blushed bright red realising that he had been standing there staring at a blank wall thinking about Minho again.

“Hyung?” Taemin bit his lip nervously, “Are you sure you’re okay?” He asked with a slight frown as he watched Jinki’s face turn redder by the second. He was a bit concerned considering he had walked out of the bedroom and see Jinki staring at nothing, and looking completely dazed and mesmerised. Taemin had called him a few times and tugged on his arm before he had even noticed him.

“I… uh… I…” Jinki stuttered rubbing his face, “I… I’m… fine!” He finally mumbled out, looking down at the floor, too embarrassed to meet Taemin’s eyes. He gulped when he saw the bedroom door open, and Minho stepped out, flashing a grin at Jinki and Taemin, and Jinki immediately turned and ran for the bathroom.

By breakfast Jinki was a gibbering wreck, he couldn’t concentrate on anything with Minho sitting opposite him, grinning at him like a Cheshire cat. He swallowed his breakfast in a hurry, ignoring the weird glances Kibum and Taemin shot him, he wasn’t normally this quiet at breakfast, but Jinki’s heart was racing and he couldn’t stop thinking about Minho, how he had felt pressed up against him, and his breath hot on his skin. He swallowed again and tried to think disgusting thoughts, and tried to think about anything but Minho.

*

Jinki sighed in relief as he looked around the room, it was quiet and he figured everyone had gone to bed, leaving him in silence. He smiled softly, finally some peace from Minho… he’s really doing my head in…. With a deep breath he started to read the papers the manager had given him, he was meant to go through them. He hoped they wouldn’t take too long because he was feeling tired, and he just wanted to collapse onto his bed and sleep.

He was glad there wasn’t much paper work for him to go through, and he was almost done when he felt a hand on his shoulder. Jinki froze and lifted his head, feeling his heart speed up immediately as he saw Minho staring down innocently at him, and he was shirtless again. Jinki swallowed deeply and looked back down at his papers. Damn it, why isn’t he asleep? Argh trust Minho to still be up, I’m probably going to dream of him all night now!

“Hyung, it’s late, come to bed with me.”

Jinki tried not to think about Minho’s words, because to him it sounded like Minho was telling him to sleep with him. He shook his head, not trusting his voice, because knowing his luck he’d blurt out something like “yes I want to sleep with you!” So he just shook his head firmly, and tried to ignore the fingers on his shoulder.

“Hyung, this can wait, you need your beauty sleep.” Minho pursed his lips together, and then seeing as Jinki was still just ignoring him, he decided to take it one step further. After all it wasn’t fair, Jinki had seen his bare chest and even his ass, but Jinki wouldn’t even let him see his bare chest. So Minho reached down and grabbed a hold of Jinki’s t-shirt and he started to tug it up, intent on removing it.

Jinki froze and he quickly grabbed the hem of his shirt and desperately started to tug it down, “Minho! What are you doing?” He cried out, trying so hard to keep his shirt on, and he only succeeded because Minho was distracted by the sound of a door squeaking, and he let go as he looked up. Jinki also looked up and saw Jonghyun, leaving the bedroom, and with out a second thought he leaped up and ran at Jonghyun, screaming out “Jonghyun! Help me!”

Jonghyun stopped and turned frowning, he looked slightly amused and confused as Jinki ran to him, and then he clung to Jonghyun’s back hiding behind him. Jonghyun blinked over at Minho, as Jinki babbled behind him, “Jonghyun, you have to protect me from Minho! You have to!” He protested loudly, clinging to Jonghyun’s back. “Don’t move! Don’t… let him near me!”

“What? What game are you guys playing?” Jonghyun sounded amused, “protect you from Minho? What? What the hell hyung?” Jonghyun grinned and he turned trying to see Jinki’s face, but Jinki held onto his back and dug his nails in, stopping him from turning completely.

“Minho! He… he… keeps trying to molest me!”

Minho stepped up close to Jonghyun, and pouted across at him and Jonghyun held back a laugh, “Molest you?” He repeated and grinned across at Minho, “what the… how on earth would Minho molest you?” Jonghyun asked and before Jinki could answer Kibum and Taemin appeared, looking half asleep and yawning

“What the hell is going on?” Kibum asked sleepily, “What the hell are you doing Jinki?”

Jonghyun turned to grin at Kibum, “Hyung thinks Minho was trying to molest him…” He grinned and turned to look at Minho, “so… Minho what exactly did you do?” He smirked, and it was obvious no one believed Minho was trying to molest Jinki.

Pouting Minho replied, “I just told him to go to bed…” he trailed off glancing across at Jinki who was peeping over Jonghyun’s shoulder.

“Lies! All… lies!” Jinki sputtered, sounding upset and annoyed, “and… what… about this morning?” Jinki’s voice practically dropped to a whisper and he felt his cheeks burning up again, and he quickly buried his face against Jonghyun’s back, hoping no one would see how red his cheeks were.

Minho shrugged and looked across at Kibum, “I hugged you this morning, Hyung? How is that molesting you?” He pouted and sighed heavily, and Kibum just shrugged and shot Minho and Jinki dirty looks before he went straight back to bed. Taemin went to Jinki and patted him on the back, and slowly lead him into the bathroom to talk.

“Hyung, it’s okay, I believe you.” He smiled brightly to Jinki as he led him into the bathroom shutting the door with a click, leaving Jonghyun and Minho alone together.

“So… uh what really happened?” Jonghyun asked Minho casually, and the younger just shrugged his shoulders. “Was it just a hug, Jinki-hyung did seem a bit weird this morning?” Jonghyun, frowned, “or is he just overreacting again?”

“Well… it was just a hug… to show him how much I missed him.” Minho grinned, “I think I can safely say he missed me a lot too.” He grinned and Jonghyun just looked confused, “You should sleep Hyung, I’m going to wait up for Taemin and Jinki.

“Okay, whatever, just… don’t do anything to upset Jinki-hyung unless you want Kibum to kill you tomorrow!” Jonghyun sounded serious as he spoke, “Good night.” He mumbled and walked back into the bedroom.

*

Minho sat outside in the dark waiting for Taemin and Jinki and he didn’t have long to wait before the door opened and Taemin came out leading Jinki out. Neither of them saw Minho there until he stood up in front of them, “I just want to talk hyung, that’s all I promise.” Minho spoke seriously, and despite Jinki reaching for Taemin, he just ran away to the bedroom and Jinki pouted thinking, traitor! He just left me here with molesting Minho!

Jinki swallowed nervously as Minho stared seriously at him, his fingers reaching for Jinki’s elbow and he gripped tightly, steering him back towards the living room. Jinki was conscious of the fact that Kibum would be pissed off if he was woken and so he knew he had to be very quiet. He swallowed as Minho pushed him down on the couch, sitting next to him.

“Hyung, I wasn’t trying to molest you, I was just… telling you, or showing you how much I missed you.” Minho smiled gently as he traced patterns across Jinki’s skin, “I’m sorry if I was a little too intense… but it’s your fault really.” Jinki blinked frowning across at Minho and he went to protest but Minho held up a hand to silence him, “it’s your fault, Hyung.” Minho pouted, “For making me like you, and for making me think about you all the time.”

Jinki just gaped at Minho trying to process his words, “What? What? Jinki mumbled confused, he was sure his face was turning bright red again and he was glad it was dark in the room, and that Minho couldn’t see his blushing face. “I… I… don’t… understand…” He finished lamely, his brain was spinning, and he felt curious about what Minho meant, he was sure Minho could not like him the same way he liked him.

“Hyung,” Minho reached for Jinki’s hand and he held onto it, “Jinki-hyung, I really like you; I like you… more than a friend.” Minho smiled, leaning in close to Jinki, “And I think you like me too, right?” His eyes glittered in the dark and Jinki felt dizzy as Minho’s words sunk into his brain, and he felt frozen and sure he must’ve heard wrong.

“Ah… Minho-ah… I think… I heard you wrong.” Jinki frowned, “I heard… something strange…” He shook his head and went to speak again but Minho pressed his lips to Jinki’s, silencing him immediately. Jinki’s eyes slid shut as he felt Minho’s soft lips kiss him gently, he felt like he was floating as Minho’s hands slid around his head, and he felt his fingers soft on his scalp, and those amazing lips crushed against his own.

Jinki felt all tingly, when Minho finally pulled away, his breathing ragged and uneven and Jinki found it was hard to breathe. He sucked in a deep breath as Minho stroked his face lightly, “Do… you understand… now Hyung?” He asked with a smile on his face, “Do you?” Minho repeated, biting his lip lightly, suddenly feeling nervous because Jinki was just staring at him.

Jinki felt all dazed and confused, he found it hard to concentrate on anything but Minho’s lips and how much he wanted to kiss him again. He shook his head slowly to try and clear the fog in his brain. Deciding it must be some kind of practical joke or set up, and the other members would jump out and laugh at him or something.

“Hyung?” Minho pouted, he couldn’t believe he was wrong, but the fact that Jinki was shaking his head at him made him think he had been wrong and he sighed, “Hyung… you don’t like me?” He frowned, he was sure Jinki had been kissing him back, but now he just felt confused too.

“Minho…” Jinki whispered finally, “Ah… you… really like me?” He frowned, “this… isn’t just some kind of game or joke?” He asked seriously his heart pounding so fast, he really hoped that Minho liked him, but somehow it just didn’t seem real to Jinki. Everything was happening too fast for him to comprehend and make sense of it.

“Of course, Hyung!” Minho smiled his fingers stroking Jinki’s arm and he reached down and held Jinki’s hand, “I thought about you the whole time I was in Canada. I missed you so much Hyung, I’ll show you how much…” He trailed off and before Jinki could say a word, he leaned in and kissed him again. Kissing Jinki with lots of passion and he hoped he could feel his emotions and affection in the kisses.

Suddenly it all seemed very real to Jinki, as he felt Minho’s lips against his own, and he couldn’t help but respond, and press against Minho desperately, opening his mouth as he felt Minho’s tongue against his lips. The only thing he could focus on was the pleasure taking over his brain and body, and how amazing it felt to be finally kissing Minho.

Jinki collapsed against the couch feeling light headed and giddy, and Minho had his arms wrapped around his waist, “Hyung… that was amazing… wasn’t it?” Minho grinned, and he kissed Jinki’s ear, “Jinki-hyung, you like me too, don’t you?” He grinned as he saw Jinki nod his head slowly, “so you’re mine now, Hyung!” Minho replied proudly and then hugged Jinki tightly, running his fingers down Jinki’s chest slowly.

“That means… you’re mine too, Minho?” Jinki asked softly, looking over at Minho, “… and we’re… together?” He asked cautiously sounding all shy and insecure and Minho laughed softly before he nodded his head eagerly.

“Yes… ah… you’re my boyfriend!” Minho grinned and pressed a finger to Jinki’s chest, “now that’s sorted… there is just one thing that I don’t think is fair.” He cross his arms in front of his chest and Jinki looked puzzled, “You’ve seen me shirtless hyung, but I haven’t seen you shirtless. Hell, you’ve even seen my ass,” He smirked and laughed softly as he heard Jinki gasp.

“But… but that’s not fair!” Jinki pouted, “it’s not like I made you take your shirt off… you just happened to be shirtless.” He mumbled softly, as Minho moved, and before Jinki could do anything, Minho was sitting on his lap, leaning down over him. “Minho!” Jinki protested, and he struggled to get Minho to move, but instead all he did was rock their hips together.

“Hyung, you know what I’m saying is right.” Minho replied smugly, “Just take your shirt off Hyung. Or are you hiding something? Like… you have boobs? Or you have a bra fetish?” Minho smirked seeing how offended Jinki looked hearing that, and so with a sigh he nodded his head slowly, and he just shut his eyes as he felt Minho’s fingers grab his shirt.

“You know, Minho this is unfair! And… you shouldn’t be doing this to me… your hyung!” Jinki mumbled, pouting slightly, “not everyone is as drop dead gorgeous as you are, or confident to show off their bodies.” He sighed and pressed his fingers to Minho’s wrist, before sighing and just giving in. He waited nervously watching Minho’s face.

“Hyung.” Minho pouted, “You make it sound like such a big deal…” He sighed before he leaned forward and place gentle kisses on Jinki’s face, first on his lips and then on his cheeks, nose and forehead. “Hyung,” He paused shifting slightly so he wasn’t sitting quite so awkwardly on Jinki. “Hyung, we don’t have to… but it’s been driving me insane…”

Jinki sighed and nodded his head slowly, “Okay… okay Minho…” he breathed in deeply, feeling his heartbeat increase as he felt Minho’s hands skim along the edge of his shirt, and he felt his long legs shifting slightly on Jinki’s thighs. He was thankful Minho was sitting higher up on him; otherwise he would be feeling very awkward.

Minho smiled and leaned forward kissing the tip of Jinki’s nose, he had won, and he licked his lips slowly before he trailed both his hands along the edge of Jinki’s shirt, watching as the elder sucked in a deep breath. Jinki looked nervous and tired, but Minho felt excited and happy, as he slowly tugged Jinki’s shirt up his chest, and pulled it off.

“Hyung…” Minho whispered, pressing his fingertips to Jinki’s stomach, “Hyung… why were you so worried?” He smiled wider as he saw Jinki blushing slightly, and Minho sighed happily, his eyes staring intently at Jinki’s chest.

Jinki bit his lip, and he shut his eyes as he felt Minho’s fingers glide over his now bare chest, and he shivered slightly, as the fingers pressed downwards. Slowly Jinki reached for Minho and he sighed as he stroked Minho’s chest, running his fingers down the length of his body and he stroked his hipbones lightly, finding it suddenly hard to breathe, and when he looked up and met Minho’s eyes he saw they were glazed with desire too.

Jinki felt like he was dreaming, and he licked his lips unconsciously as he let his fingers stroke Minho’s chest, running his fingertips over his lightly muscled chest. He didn’t feel so bad about being shirtless now, he felt a little pathetic about being so nervous, but he just felt like his own body was substandard compared to Minho’s. But seeing how happy Minho looked, and how he kept stroking Jinki’s chest, he felt better about it all.

Minho leaned in again and kissed Jinki again, squeezing his eyes shut as he ran his hands down his chest, and he slowly rocked hips down against Jinki’s, feeling pressure and desire building inside of him. He groaned slightly, as he felt Jinki’s fingers stroking along the edge of his boxers, and it took all of his efforts to pull away from Jinki, suddenly remembering how late it was and the fact that they had to be up early.

“Hyung…” Minho breathed deeply, “Hyung…” his voice was filled with regret, “shit we need to sleep.” He frowned and sighed heavily, letting his fingers circle Jinki’s stomach lightly, “I don’t want to… but we have to? Before… we get anymore worked up?” He pouted, and then leaned forward kissing Jinki gently, wishing they didn’t have to go to bed.

Jinki didn’t think he had ever felt happier as Minho held his hand gently, and they made their way to the bedroom. They paused outside, and kissed lightly, and then still holding hands went into the room. Jinki smiled as climbed into bed, and he heard a voice whisper, “night hyung!” He then felt Minho’s lips against his earlobe and Minho hugged him lightly, before he pulled away to go to his own bed.

Jinki sighed happily, and smiled across to where Minho’s bed was, he didn’t think he could be happier. He felt as if he was floating above the bed, and he sighed again as he shut his eyes. He couldn’t wait for the next day, and he hoped the next day would be as awesome. It didn’t take long before Jinki and Minho were fast asleep, smiling and dreaming happily.

***

*fails* ^^;;; dfjksdkghfdk I really… didn’t know how to end this! :( Argh.

*crawls into corner and hides*
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Comments:
[User Picture]From: decodexx
2010-02-28 09:23 am (UTC)
omfg. that was the cutest thing ever. I loved Minho in this. and Onew being all shy and insecure, that was so adorable!

great job. <3
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From: ex_argh
2010-02-28 10:11 am (UTC)
^^ thank you :D
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[User Picture]From: volatileflame
2010-02-28 10:45 am (UTC)
so cute X3
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From: ex_argh
2010-02-28 08:36 pm (UTC)
thanks^^;;
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[User Picture]From: geenkey
2010-02-28 12:13 pm (UTC)
oh my GOD!!! i'm TOFUHOgasm now!!! heuheuheuheuehheuheuehueheue.... cute!!!!
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From: ex_argh
2010-02-28 08:41 pm (UTC)
XDDD lol thanks for thinking it was cute ;) ♥
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[User Picture]From: nuile
2010-02-28 12:42 pm (UTC)
Tsk, tsk... That's one really confident thing named Minho in there ^_^

I liked it immensely ^^ I especially liked the beginning and the track of Jinki's thoughts ^__^ Maybe because later I simply lost my ability to think completely xDDD Just kept squeaking and clapping my hands xDDD
Such fiction makes people idiots xDD Take it as a compliment, it's been a while since I totally lost my mind over a fic ^___^

Thanks for writing it!
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From: ex_argh
2010-02-28 08:43 pm (UTC)
XDDD yeah thank you XDDDD
oh thank you~ ♥ your comment makes me excessively happy :DDD
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From: ex_argh
2010-02-28 08:44 pm (UTC)
thank you so much ^_^~ your comment makes me so happy~ ♥
:DDD
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[User Picture]From: eter_loves_yaoi
2010-02-28 09:58 pm (UTC)
fufufufu, hi there onho <3 shirtless molesting wicked pervy minho, me likes XD and, oh jinki, you are such a prude, we all know you wanna get smexed by minho ;p

thanks for sharing, I loved it <3
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From: ex_argh
2010-03-01 02:34 am (UTC)
XDD yes of course Jinki wants to get smexed by Minho XDDD
thank you :D ♥
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[User Picture]From: weerainbow
2010-03-01 12:00 am (UTC)
wow, that was really intense! My heart was beating hard reading that, I love how you built up this amazing tension and intense attraction between them without even writing anything graphic or smutty at all ^^ I love how Minho was teasing Jinki bit by bit like he was testing to see how he would react, and it was so cute when Jinki got all spooked and ran to hide behind Jonghyun awww.
But, yeah, that scene with the two of them when Minho confessed and kissed Jinki was sooooo good :o) Sparks were flying!!
♥♥
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From: ex_argh
2010-03-01 02:56 am (UTC)
:O really? XDDDDD ^^;; I love how... I didn't even know I did that (build tension I mean XDD)! I kinda... wrote this in a hurry x_x;!

XD Aww thank you ^_____^~ I was a bit worried about this~ because I initially wrote it such a hurry XDD so I wasn't sure if it was okay or if it was just weird and made no sense XDDD
sorry for the long reply XD and thank you :D your comment makes me happy~ ♥ :D
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From: eijifujiryoma
2010-03-01 06:41 am (UTC)
Oh, you wrote one! <33

Minho pouts a lot. So cute. ^^ And Jinki being shy and insecure, I just want to gobble him up. Minho so owns him. XD And Jinki hiding behind Jjong...WHY SO ADORABLE, CAN I PLEASE KIDNAP HIM RIGHT NOW!!! Minho, grab him and molest him more right now, make your mark or whatever before I do it myself. *is bricked*

I don't mind it being long. It should be longer and rated NC-17/ R. Why isn't it rated R? Who cares if they have to wake up early. T.T I'm the one worked up, not them. XP

I think this should be PG-15 though. 8D And...is it just me, or do I spot JongYu, OnKey and OnTae in here? *wiggles eyebrows*

Anyway, loved it and you must write more!!!!!! Remember the TofuHo lack? Kukukuku...
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From: ex_argh
2010-03-01 08:12 am (UTC)
^^;; hi ♥ XD yeah I did *_*;; partly coz of the Tofuho lack T_T and because you know T_T; I couldn't stop thinking about them? *is sad* ^^; Yes you can kidnap him XDDDDD

*hides* I kinda fail at writing smut now :/ dfhsdjkf it was meant to be a short (yes T_T short...) oneshot? XD I still love how... I thought it was 2 pages long or something -__-;

LOL do you? *_*; do you really spot JongYu, OnKey and OnTae? LOL~ XD It wasn't on purpose... if u spot it^^; except that you know... Jinki belongs to Minho :P

I actually started another fic... before I wrote this... but its not finished yet... and probably going to be much longer D: but I'm not entirely sure about it XD

you should write some more fics 8D its depressing how... few TofuHo fics there are posted T_____T;!
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From: eijifujiryoma
2010-03-01 09:25 am (UTC)
BB, you should so write more. AND I'M SO HAPPY *goes to plan out kidnapping*

Aww, try~~~ I mean, it was so close up there...almost humping. 8D You write well, wth are you talking about. WRITE, WRITE, WRITE!!!! (I'm still too scared to pass that line -.-;;)

Yeah, I spotted JongYu during the part where Jinki hides behind Jjong, OnKey at the part where Jjong says Key's gonna kill Minho if he upset Jinki any further and OnTae where Taemin leads Jinki away into the bathroom. It wasn't on purpose? Must be my excessive Jinki bias then. ^^;;

And hell yeah, you're right. Jinki so belongs to Minho.

Another fic? TofuHo? Muahahahaha. Must be long. Must have smut. *wheedles*

And I did post another one up. I destroyed the innocence of a little boy. *runs to hide*
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From: ex_argh
2010-03-01 09:34 am (UTC)
only if u write more too :P! Hehehe~ 8D have fun kidnapping~ :O

still scared to pass what line? XD you mean smut? 8D My problem~ is... I like to write smutty stuff in one go -_-; and if I don't have the time/inspiration I just feel like it doesn't come out right? XD

well XD now you mention it @___@ I see what you mean! But it wasn't intentional hehehe~ it just happened that way... must be my Jinki bias coming out too ^^;;;

well yes XD I was planning on having smut in the other one :P if I ever finish it :/ LOL I will get there eventually~ XDD

yesss! XDD YAY I just saw your fic posted! ^______^! I'm about to read it and comment :P tsk~ you destroyed the innocence of a little boy? *gasp* XDDD ♥ :D
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From: eijifujiryoma
2010-03-01 01:57 pm (UTC)
I shall definitely write more! Want to help with the kidnapping? 8D

Yup, smut. I can write foreplay but I sort of chicken out during the 'all the way' part. I'm finicky, I like detail and I'm scared I'll get bored/ frustrated writing halfway through and give up which is so not cool! And yes, you're so right. Take your sweet time. >:P

IT HAS SMUT??? YOU MUST WRITE IT THEN! WANT ANY HELP? I AM AT YOUR SERVICE. CHEERLEADER, BETA, WHATEVER.

Yes, I defiled the innocence of a sweet four-year old. *face palms* That was the fic I told you I was having a hard time writing. I just kept bursting out into laughter when it got to the serious parts. XDXDXD

I read your comment~ <33
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From: ex_argh
2010-03-01 10:26 pm (UTC)
YAY! XD 8D sure I'll help with the kidnapping~ 8DDD

detail is good^^;; I know what you mean though~ its not like... you can write some smut and then stop XD and go back to it later! e_e well I can't^^; which is why it makes it hard~ coz you have to have the time~ and the inspiration or idea XDDD

well ... it doesn't have smut yet o_o because I didn't get to that part yet! XD But it's planned... maybe a beta would be good? when I finally finish it D:
(... and *cough* now I even thought... about writing a smutty sequel to this fic too^^; *hides*)

LOL you didn't reaaally defile the innocence of a sweet 4 year old ;) because he didn't really know what he was doing... :) so its okay ♥ :D
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[User Picture]From: kisa829
2010-03-01 08:08 am (UTC)
TOFUHO AHOY!!! ♥

Sexy, seductive Minho...shy, embarrassed Onew...so much love!

This was adorable and hot! XD
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From: ex_argh
2010-03-01 08:23 am (UTC)
thank you ^^;; ♥ I'm glad u thought it was hot?! :DDD
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[User Picture]From: jishu
2010-03-09 09:11 am (UTC)
love it *_________*
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From: ex_argh
2010-03-09 09:40 am (UTC)
aww thank you~ ♥ :DDD
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[User Picture]From: czu_1391
2010-05-23 04:33 pm (UTC)
late comment is late

asdfghjkl;
this is one the most awesome, cutest & lust-filled onho i've ever read!
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From: ex_argh
2010-05-24 10:59 am (UTC)
lol its okay? considering I just posted it on shineesmut? XDDDDDD *fails*

thank you? ;__; for the comment :D ♥
:DDD
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[User Picture]From: mikaerayohiko
2010-10-22 11:38 pm (UTC)

Morning fanfic ♥

Lol I just woke up with this fic .o. oh yeah~~~ Love this! haha so cute!!!! xDDD the molesting issue was funny hahahaha xD I can imagine them having that childish conversation lol
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From: ex_argh
2010-10-23 01:46 am (UTC)

Re: Morning fanfic ♥

XD awww lol was it nice to wake up to it? ^^;; ♥ I'm glad you thought it was cute :D thank you~ ♥
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[User Picture]From: mikaerayohiko
2010-10-26 02:33 pm (UTC)

Re: Morning fanfic ♥

lol hell yeah.. xD >o< it's so cute, it's gonna be my fav wake up call -fic~ wee
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From: ex_argh
2010-10-26 09:53 pm (UTC)

Re: Morning fanfic ♥

aww thank you~ ^O^;
♥ :DDD
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